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Obsession

Member since 2003 · Posted 18 Sep 2005 · 0 comments

This wall Invisible barrier Will not turn me away You are my skin My sight My blood My own to take forever Look at me Look at ME Because every island Has its powerfully dark secrets And our home is no different Your life is false It is not good for us We are to move as one To breathe To fight To die together If I am obsessed Then you are vain To think that it is you Who MAKES me as I am I was born to love you As were you to love me Go GO NOW LEAVE ME BE For I am no worse without myself To look into that mirror and see it See nothing I am nothing but flesh And you You are my own To take forever

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