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Land of The Lost (Free verse) by TheModestKing
There’s no place for a thinker, In the Land of The Lost, Where the sheep are hand-reared, And the farmers are shot, The conveyer belt of shepherds, Soon lose their worth, When they open their eyes, From within the herd, There’s a blanket of confusion, A plan for every unit, Puppeteers dance with the devil, On your behalf, And should a voice stand tall, With the chest of a giant, To speak the words of the wise, His voice will be silenced, So in secret and in darkness, We find comfort in, While we plan our escape, To the Great Within,

Up the ladder: The KINGS
Down the ladder: Emails

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.023713
Overall Rank: 7482
Posted: May 12, 2011 8:51 PM PDT; Last modified: May 12, 2011 8:52 PM PDT
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