| Re: Perversions 4: Kink in Space by razorgrin |
10-Feb-03/1:45 PM |
|
|
 |
| regarding some deleted poem... |
11-Feb-03/6:10 PM |
|
Tee hee. That last one is hilarious. I grant you a ten because I'm feeling strangely generous, and also because the poem that came up when I came on here a moment ago was absolutely dreadful. When exactly is this production, by the way?
|
|
|
|
| Re: The Long Walk Back by Jigg |
11-Feb-03/6:14 PM |
|
Bwahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! Tee hee hee hee hee. Giggle giggle. I'm sorry, I haven't stopped giggling since I first read this. This is one of the funniest pieces I've ever read here. Please, please, PLEASE tell me this is one of your non-serious ones.
|
|
|
|
| Re: Perversions 6: Judgement Day by razorgrin |
19-Feb-03/10:28 AM |
|
Sweetheart, sweetheart, sweetheart. Th'art a very sick child. One of the better crops, indeed.
|
|
|
|
| Re: Perversions 5: Kink vs. Mothra by razorgrin |
19-Feb-03/10:32 AM |
|
The last one is excellent, but the other two don't seem as great, m'dear. Possibly because they don't really let people figure out what they're about as well as the others do.
|
|
|
|
| regarding some deleted poem... |
25-Feb-03/9:44 AM |
|
Ah, this again. Excellent. Couple of little things: one, the last line of the first stanza might work better if enclosed in brackets -- I can't recall if you had it thus the first time you posted this or not. Also, same line, either get rid of the comma or add one after 'all'. Excellent none the less.
|
|
|
|
| Re: Sleepy Geek by razorgrin |
25-Feb-03/10:02 AM |
|
Hee hee... I remember that evening. Sorry I couldn't do anything about it for you.
|
|
|
|
| Re: Gargamel & Azriel by Bachus |
26-Feb-03/1:32 PM |
|
Azrael, Azrael, AzraEl, AZRAEL!!! Why is there not one English person on fifty who can remember the damn cat's name, and not one that seems to be able to spell it???
|
|
|
|
| regarding some deleted poem... |
27-Feb-03/7:58 AM |
|
Thou art brilliant, m'love. I know it's an accepted fact, but it bears repeating occasionally. 'Flesh tears' alone gets you a ten. I don't think I know anyone but you who could use blood quite so much in one stanza and get away with it.
|
|
|
|
| Re: balthazar by UnityMitford |
28-Feb-03/6:54 AM |
|
This is much much better if you mean 'burning bridges' literally.
|
|
|
|
| Re: Ten new questions from Dan Rather by horus8 |
28-Feb-03/6:55 AM |
|
Number one: you forgot 'deliberately mispronounce' his name as well.
|
|
|
|
| Re: A Buncha Dungeons and Dragons Haiku by razorgrin |
13-Mar-03/8:07 PM |
|
First I must deal with your talking about nothing else when I see you, then I must deal with it in your poetry... Bah. See if I ever make you a CD again. I give you points because it's funny, remove some points because I'm sick of the subject, add some because it's amusing to see your conversation put in poetry, and remove some because I've heard it all before. Love 'n' kisses. Really.
|
|
|
|
| Re: Best Present Ever by razorgrin |
13-Mar-03/8:08 PM |
|
I remove one point. You know damn well why. (There. See? I'm getting better. I only took off one point. And I didn't kill anyone last Saturday. Be happy.)
|
|
|
|
| Re: Orders to My Zombie Legions by razorgrin |
13-Mar-03/8:11 PM |
|
Eee! Can I join in? That is downright brilliant. (I assume that it's Bach's Toccata -- the one sometimes known as the Doomsday Toccata? Good good.)
|
|
|
|
| Re: A Vietnam Homecoming by scitz |
14-Mar-03/5:54 AM |
|
Pssst... despite the fact that their last letters are the same, 'Blood' and 'good' don't rhyme.
|
|
|
|
| regarding some deleted poem... |
28-Mar-03/5:52 AM |
|
Using 'Where no birds sing' as a first line reminds me too much of 'La Belle Dame Sans Merci' for comfort.
|
|
|
|
| Re: Perversions 7: Viva Las Naked by razorgrin |
28-Mar-03/11:12 PM |
Alas, I'm afraid these aren't your best, darlink. 1's alright, 2's somewhat obscure and boring, and 3's nothing special. Though funny.
Is Hank one of your acquaintances? If so, please don't tell me which one.
|
|
|
|
| Re: Bible Quoting Fag Killer (So it is said) by Blindproject217 |
1-Apr-03/9:20 PM |
I haven't laughed so much for ages!!! Congratulations!!! That was BRILLIANT!!!!
Oh, wait a minute. You were SERIOUS? Gack.
I am deeply offended that you should refer to some of my type as agnostics as opposed to atheists. This is quite discriminatory. Desist, cur.
|
|
|
|
| Re: Last Nightâs Dream (Freud-o-riffic) by razorgrin |
8-Apr-03/9:54 AM |
|
I still haven't figured it out yet, dahling. Sorry.
|
|
|
|
| Re: All hail Discordia?(a true haiku story) by razorgrin |
8-Apr-03/9:58 AM |
|
I forgot to ask... if I come across you doing this again sometime, what do I do?
|
|
|
|
