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All hail Discordia?(a true haiku story) (Haiku) by razorgrin A girl I donât know
Told me she had my friendâs book.
âHail Erisâ she said.
âI doubt that was me,â
âI wasnât thereâ, I replied.
âYes you were, â she said.
âI remember you,
trench-coated, your hair in buns.
Late, one august night.â
âYou were at the bar
Golden apple raised, preaching.
Your friend gave me thisâ
The Principia,
âYour friend Marcusâ lent to her.
Proof that it happened.
I donât go to bars
Apple-less, I know no Mark.
But I do sleepwalkâ¦
Up the ladder:
The bouchon
Down the ladder:
Because You Love Me
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Posted: April 4, 2003 6:27 AM PST; Last modified: April 4, 2003 6:27 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.681818 Overall Rank: 1996 Comments:
You should have that looked into smiley. You might wkae up only to find that dream of falling off a cliff to be true -9-.
what, and preaching to the masses of a religion I don't practice in a disreputable psedo-irish bar isn't danerous?
Only in some countries.
I forgot to ask... if I come across you doing this again sometime, what do I do?
Undo your belt and bend over for six of the Best, of course. Good God man, have you no sense of duty?
One always has to ask the girl first (preferably when she's awake). One can never know what she'll decide duty is for that particular day.
I'm out of lemonade.
I'm not surprised. All right, ALL right, I get the hint. They're really going to start wondering up here, though...
Stick to the truth, it suits you better than humourmous fabrications.10
thankee.
This is supposed to be a poem........hahahaha
That's a pretty sad try at a heckle, fartknocker. You're just all bitchy because I called you on some utterly crap poemes. You are indeed simple. Tell me, do use know how to use periods to end sentences, or do you always use "hahaha"? If the latter, I'm sure you're great at eulogies. How exactly is it not a poem? a series of haiku stanzas detailing a narrative, as a modification of a traditional form. That said, go squeeze your pimples and try again when you're older and have maybe grown some balls.
intriguing.
Ah the days of the Principia Discordia, the Illuminatus! Trilogy, and The Book of the SubGenius. I think I read them all in one year and it blew my mind wide open.
Toss in Zukav's "The Dancing Wu Li Masters" and you have the full glory of the experience. Have you read the Shrodinger's Cat trilogy as well?
I loved that trilogoy! Rock and roll.
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hahahah! nice.