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Bible Quoting Fag Killer (So it is said) (Free verse) by Blindproject217 Looking about at the desolate streets
I am alone
My ideals that have been told are true
Are burned before me
As nations rise to take power
Many protest
I stand behind the truth that I know
I cling to my reality
I am afraid
Afraid to open my eyes
And see nothing
To see the emptiness that motivates
The lost about me
But as I look in the mirror
Im not ashamed
I know who I am
And you hate it
And I hate you for the pain you give
I hate you for hating me
And Im lost in the hate that consumes me
And my ideals that were crushed
Are thrown back in my face
With a note that condemns me
With only a question
An inquiry that asks
How are you different from me?
With my life that shows
The opposite of my beliefs
How can I be different?
In a world that doesnât want me to be
You wanted to know why Im different?
Why I refuse to open my mind?
Cause your relative stance is inadequate
To fill what I need inside
With your agnostic screams of tolerance
With your humanistic stance
With all that you have
With all that you are
Youâre nothing but a pawn, controlled from afar
Up the ladder:
PRAYER OF ECHOES
Down the ladder:
Violent edge
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Posted: April 1, 2003 8:12 PM PST; Last modified: April 1, 2003 8:12 PM PSTWeighted score: 3.7727273 Overall Rank: 13511 The following users have marked this poem on their favorites list:
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I haven't laughed so much for ages!!! Congratulations!!! That was BRILLIANT!!!!
Oh, wait a minute. You were SERIOUS? Gack. I am deeply offended that you should refer to some of my type as agnostics as opposed to atheists. This is quite discriminatory. Desist, cur.
P.S.: Shouldn't the last line be: 'You're nothing but a prawne'?
This must of been how the Aztecs felt too, before the shit went down. You'd better get ready, because the gnostics are the leat of your worries. Picture Allah with a bad case of SARS sitting next to you on a long flight home. better hold your breath Chirpy, there's turbulence ahead. As for the difference between us? Natural talent and about a 100 iq points. You wouldn't now an agnostic from a used taoist's hand towel if Simon the mage was working magic from the recesses of your large intestine. That is all. You are excused.
I like the bumper sticker that reads, "I'm a Militant Agnostic - I don't know and neither do you." Then again, I also like what Francis Schaeffer said to one man who claimed to be an agnostic, "'Agnostic', that's Greek, isn't it? In Latin that would be 'Ignoramus,'" or words to that effect.
I think you're being controlled by the Bavarian Illuminati. Wrap your head in tinfoil and be sure not to leave air holes. The whole world is watching, dude!
Dear boy,... I don't even know where to begin. Does Jesus condemn, or does he save? It's not heaven if in the end not everyone gets to go. Jesus gave up his life for the sake of tolerance and love. You don't know what I'm talking about do you?
Either way your poem is simply a rant. Good luck.
I'm soooo bored of war.I know lets all go back to R.I.P poetry.
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I actually think this is a great poem. WELL DONE, 10!,
i also commend you for standing up for yourself infront of all these people stabbing at your faith. 248 view(s)
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Homosexuals aren't bad because it says so in the Bible. They're bad because they're gay. The sooner you come to terms with that little revelation, the better it'll be for all concerned.
I agree with Tintagiles, the last line should be 'prawne', not 'pawn'. At least that's what I thought upon a first read.
I'm glad to see that you're a nice person, however don't be too Kantian in your life because as I've found it's a pile of crap and people will take advantage of your niceness. Just get along with everyone who deserves it. Take it easy, write what you want and enjoy it.
Good Evening to All.
Been There, Done That
Bought The Damn T-shirt
The sexual repression of paternalistic monotheistic religions can be great inspiration for art... but the pagans had better technique. There's plenty of angst and angst poetry around. (I'm not above adding my crap to the pile.) It sounds like you're almost read to move on. From experience, you'll thank yourself on so many levels when you do so.