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25-Apr-09/3:00 PM |
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I love Hafiz or Hafez. Can't comment on your translation, but love the man, unless all you translators have added wine guzzling heresy and passionate sex to a hermit.
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| Re: quetzalcoatl by ThePariahDog |
11-Jun-09/7:46 PM |
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Wish I knew the legend, some good lines
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| Re: Dovina by Prince of Void |
3-Oct-09/5:06 PM |
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| Re: February by half.italian |
1-Feb-10/4:35 PM |
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why not when it was cold? is love when you want it or is it good all the time?
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| Re: Gerry's Song by ALChemy |
29-Mar-10/4:54 PM |
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After all those voyages, rollin' on the sea, my laddie comes sailin' back to me. Was it with she or with he, he'd rather be? In India or California? No matter, long as my laddie's commin' back to me.
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| Re: Holy Spirit - A Tanka Poem by amanda_dcosta |
1-Aug-10/5:44 PM |
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Englsish tanka does not have to harness itself to 57577, but here you do it without feeling harnessed. The only exception might be that "delight" and "pleasure" are about the same.
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| Re: Chasing Droplets by dinah |
1-Aug-10/5:47 PM |
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it seems strange that anyone, even you, could give "any gift in the world." Gifts seem more like the special traits that make each of us unique. Yet I fee the captivity of it.
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| Re: puppy love by Freethinker1602 |
1-Aug-10/5:54 PM |
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Its the way it goes when you feed a poor dog. He almost always goes bock to his self-pity wallow.
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| Re: white whale by ThePariahDog |
1-Aug-10/5:56 PM |
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Some people think that Moby Dick is about a man after a whale. Im glad to see that you see more than that in it.
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| Re: driftwood by ThePariahDog |
11-Oct-10/12:33 AM |
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I remember the ancient times when, if memory presents truth, you were young and wrote young. Now this is good, shrouded just enough. Poemranker is abandoned now, all hands jumped ship. It must leave an able seaman wondering why he signed on.
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| Re: Best friends by amanda_dcosta |
16-Nov-10/10:14 AM |
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Sounds like the mother of a good son or the memory of a child with a good brother
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| Re: tree in a flood by Skamper |
12-Feb-11/8:07 PM |
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Hey, settle down, its all too fast. Delayed gratification. Yes, please, make it last!
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| Re: Late Song by nypoet22 |
12-Feb-11/8:08 PM |
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I gave up after the first verse. Get specific or get out!
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| Re: Mornings by alvinb |
12-Feb-11/8:09 PM |
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I hate these boring suicide poems!
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| Re: Self-Inflicted Wounds by wilco |
12-Feb-11/8:11 PM |
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You used to be better than this. What the hell's gone wrong?
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| Re: My Brain by T. Jonathron Remp |
12-Feb-11/8:12 PM |
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| Re: That man looks so familiar by A. Nomaly |
12-Feb-11/8:13 PM |
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best in the last ten posted :)
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| Re: Song of Creation by amanda_dcosta |
23-Apr-11/8:42 PM |
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Appropriate to use the musical descriptions, since the old church, emerging from plainsong, invented them for church music. Can't escape that music emerged from worship, is part of it, always has been
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| Re: Jesus wept by amanda_dcosta |
23-Apr-11/8:44 PM |
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Even with unlimited power, he had emotion, compassion. Hard to beat that.
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| Re: ~Methinks~ by wDaphnew |
2-Nov-11/5:34 PM |
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