on Best friends by amanda_dcosta
16 Nov 2010, 10:14 AM
Sounds like the mother of a good son or the memory of a child with a good brother
on some deleted poem
25 Apr 2009, 3:00 PM
I love Hafiz or Hafez. Can't comment on your translation, but love the man, unless all you translators have added wine guzzling heresy and passionate sex to a hermit.
on quetzalcoatl by ThePariahDog
11 Jun 2009, 7:46 PM
Wish I knew the legend, some good lines
on Dovina by Prince of Void
3 Oct 2009, 5:06 PM
Swoon!
on February by half.italian
1 Feb 2010, 4:35 PM
why not when it was cold? is love when you want it or is it good all the time?
on Gerry's Song by ALChemy
29 Mar 2010, 4:54 PM
After all those voyages, rollin' on the sea, my laddie comes sailin' back to me. Was it with she or with he, he'd rather be? In India or California? No matter, long as my laddie's commin' back to me.
on tree in a flood by Skamper
12 Feb 2011, 8:07 PM
Hey, settle down, its all too fast. Delayed gratification. Yes, please, make it last!
on Holy Spirit - A Tanka Poem by amanda_dcosta
1 Aug 2010, 5:44 PM
Englsish tanka does not have to harness itself to 57577, but here you do it without feeling harnessed. The only exception might be that "delight" and "pleasure" are about the same.
on Chasing Droplets by dinah
1 Aug 2010, 5:47 PM
it seems strange that anyone, even you, could give "any gift in the world." Gifts seem more like the special traits that make each of us unique. Yet I fee the captivity of it.
on puppy love by Freethinker1602
1 Aug 2010, 5:54 PM
Its the way it goes when you feed a poor dog. He almost always goes bock to his self-pity wallow.
on white whale by ThePariahDog
1 Aug 2010, 5:56 PM
Some people think that Moby Dick is about a man after a whale. Im glad to see that you see more than that in it.
on driftwood by ThePariahDog
11 Oct 2010, 12:33 AM
I remember the ancient times when, if memory presents truth, you were young and wrote young. Now this is good, shrouded just enough. Poemranker is abandoned now, all hands jumped ship. It must leave an able seaman wondering why he signed on.
on Self-Inflicted Wounds by wilco
12 Feb 2011, 8:11 PM
You used to be better than this. What the hell's gone wrong?
on My Brain by T. Jonathron Remp
12 Feb 2011, 8:12 PM
hehe
on That man looks so familiar by A. Nomaly
12 Feb 2011, 8:13 PM
best in the last ten posted :)
on Song of Creation by amanda_dcosta
23 Apr 2011, 8:42 PM
Appropriate to use the musical descriptions, since the old church, emerging from plainsong, invented them for church music. Can't escape that music emerged from worship, is part of it, always has been
on Jesus wept by amanda_dcosta
23 Apr 2011, 8:44 PM
Even with unlimited power, he had emotion, compassion. Hard to beat that.
on ~Methinks~ by wDaphnew
2 Nov 2011, 5:34 PM
Nonsense!