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14-May-04/8:52 PM |
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so disappointing but true...Beautifully written...~10~
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| Re: scarred by TheVampireLeStan |
15-May-04/3:15 PM |
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I dont know why people are so cruel about topics of this sort, but i feel ur pain...Once u start it never goes away, itll always b there reminding u...
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| Re: The Precious Thing by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
15-May-04/4:09 PM |
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| Re: Just Like Before by cuddlytiger17 |
19-May-04/5:16 PM |
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Thanks guys, but these still aren't new ones. I've been working on a few here and there, but nothing I'm willing to post. I appreciate the encouragement and suggestions, it really does help.
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| Re: Just A Thought by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
21-May-04/9:47 PM |
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I really liked this...It's good!
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| Re: Optimism, pessimism and my quarter theory by INTRANSIT |
21-May-04/10:01 PM |
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This is great! hehe. Definately my kind of poem! ~10~
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| Re: All the things i hate by Mutant_X |
21-May-04/10:12 PM |
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This is waaay too much like the lines from the movie Ten Things I Hate About You!!!!
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| Re: The Secrets Of Men by scitz |
26-May-04/3:56 PM |
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lol i really like this one!
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28-May-04/9:50 PM |
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| Re: Moving Forward In Reverse (For Ann) by wilco |
3-Jun-04/6:09 PM |
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i really liked this one. good job!
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| Re: I'll Make It Through by cuddlytiger17 |
16-Jul-04/6:47 PM |
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I know this isn't very good, it needs quite a bit of work. I'd appreciate any positive suggestions. :)
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| Re: Ephemeral by shit |
16-Jul-04/8:25 PM |
I really like this poem. The images are phenomenal. :)
~10~
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| Re: Honey To The Worms by shit |
16-Jul-04/8:29 PM |
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16-Jul-04/8:38 PM |
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| Re: The man of steel by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
16-Jul-04/8:52 PM |
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LMAO this is great! hahahaha. A ten no doubt.
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| Re: "Good Bye" by Blindpoetry |
19-Jul-04/11:06 AM |
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well i definitely know how this feels...
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| Re: The Cookies by Blindpoetry |
19-Jul-04/11:13 AM |
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i liked the 4th stanza...
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| Re: At least by Miggy |
9-Oct-04/3:49 PM |
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I really liked it. Good job. The last line of the chorus didn't flow right for me though, but that's just my opinion.
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| Re: Old Man by Rollsoftoiletpaper |
9-Oct-04/4:01 PM |
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3rd line needs an "r" on "you"
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9-Oct-04/4:30 PM |
:(
Overall, a really good poem. I especially liked the lines, "A memory was carved from oaks, where spiders weaved silk lairs" The last stanza was good too.
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