on "Good Bye" by Blindpoetry
19 Jul 2004, 11:06 AM
well i definitely know how this feels...
on The Cookies by Blindpoetry
19 Jul 2004, 11:13 AM
i liked the 4th stanza...
on I'll Make It Through by cuddlytiger17
16 Jul 2004, 6:47 PM
I know this isn't very good, it needs quite a bit of work. I'd appreciate any positive suggestions. :)
on Honey To The Worms by shit
16 Jul 2004, 8:29 PM
This is great. Bravo!
on some deleted poem
16 Jul 2004, 8:38 PM
ok...?
on The man of steel by <{Baba^Yaga}>
16 Jul 2004, 8:52 PM
LMAO this is great! hahahaha. A ten no doubt.
on The Secrets Of Men by scitz
26 May 2004, 3:56 PM
lol i really like this one!
on some deleted poem
28 May 2004, 9:50 PM
great! u tell um! lol
on some deleted poem
14 May 2004, 8:52 PM
so disappointing but true...Beautifully written...~10~
on scarred by TheVampireLeStan
15 May 2004, 3:15 PM
I dont know why people are so cruel about topics of this sort, but i feel ur pain...Once u start it never goes away, itll always b there reminding u...
on The Precious Thing by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
15 May 2004, 4:09 PM
lmao nice!
on Just Like Before by cuddlytiger17
19 May 2004, 5:16 PM
Thanks guys, but these still aren't new ones. I've been working on a few here and there, but nothing I'm willing to post. I appreciate the encouragement and suggestions, it really does help.
on Just A Thought by thepinkbunnyofdoom
21 May 2004, 9:47 PM
I really liked this...It's good!
on Optimism, pessimism and my quarter theory by INTRANSIT
21 May 2004, 10:01 PM
This is great! hehe. Definately my kind of poem! ~10~
on All the things i hate by Mutant_X
21 May 2004, 10:12 PM
This is waaay too much like the lines from the movie Ten Things I Hate About You!!!!
on Moving Forward In Reverse (For Ann) by wilco
3 Jun 2004, 6:09 PM
i really liked this one. good job!
on Old Man by Rollsoftoiletpaper
9 Oct 2004, 4:01 PM
3rd line needs an "r" on "you"
on some deleted poem
9 Oct 2004, 4:30 PM
:(
Overall, a really good poem. I especially liked the lines, "A memory was carved from oaks, where spiders weaved silk lairs" The last stanza was good too.
Overall, a really good poem. I especially liked the lines, "A memory was carved from oaks, where spiders weaved silk lairs" The last stanza was good too.