| Re: An Angel's Caress by Southern_Bell |
10-May-04/1:05 PM |
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This poem is so beautiful!! I just wanted to cry! I could picture everything and it felt so real...*sighs* You have some talent!
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| Re: A Portrait of Antonio Machado (Edit) by Sasha |
10-May-04/1:07 PM |
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This is a really good poem but unfortunately I have a very short attention span...
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| Re: Graffito Murder by Don-Quixote |
10-May-04/1:11 PM |
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10-May-04/1:13 PM |
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| Re: Despair by Caducus |
10-May-04/1:19 PM |
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Awww, i feel so much sympathy for the speaker...I can relate on many levels and this is such a sincere poem. The only critcism i have is that a few lines i stumbled over, they didn't flow as smoothly. Otherwise, I commend you on this.
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| Re: I'm not afraid to admit that I am attracted to Robe Lowe by RO-B-LOWE ME PLEASE |
10-May-04/1:20 PM |
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| Re: blink by VorioBuche |
10-May-04/1:23 PM |
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I admire you for your blunt wording. You say what you mean without holding back. Everything flows so smoothly, its a real piece of work. Congrats!
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| Re: Mislead by PK |
10-May-04/1:25 PM |
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You have so much emotion into this, it really grabs the readers attention. I like it a lot!!!
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| Re: no name by ~ska~ |
10-May-04/1:27 PM |
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I don't know, certain parts just don't seem to fit together right...It seems like you tried a little too hard or something...
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| Re: Karma by blankel |
10-May-04/1:34 PM |
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I REALLY like this poem!!! I don't care what anyone else says, You've got it together! LOL theres no need to say anything else!
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| Re: Bracelets In A Box by cuddlytiger17 |
11-May-04/5:27 PM |
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I refuse to argue anymore with any of you. This is all pointless. People's opinions and beliefs differ depending on the person. No one is right or wrong. Sasha I don't know why you're so hung up on trying to bring me down...My goal isn't to try to impress others, I've already stated that. But you can't expect me at 16 to have experienced "all there is" and to have grown enough to "meet your standards" of what a "good" poem is. This arguing is all really childish and thats why I'm at least ending my half of it here.
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| Re: Bracelets In A Box by cuddlytiger17 |
12-May-04/1:37 PM |
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Sasha i thank you for respecting my privacy and not giving out my website. I write poems for myself, and i post them on websites for others to apply to their own lives if they wish. I enjoy doing so, I know there are plenty of others who do also. Its as simple as that. Sliver, if you wish to know the address to my website, email me at cuddlytiger17@fastmail.fm and id be more than happy to give it to you.
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| Re: To My Love by sliver |
12-May-04/2:14 PM |
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This poem is so beautiful and heart felt...*sighs*
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12-May-04/2:22 PM |
Words can't express my awe...Can i ask if you write from your own experience or whether you take on the roll of another speaker in your poems?
A definate 10!
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| Re: A heart without keys by sliver |
12-May-04/6:38 PM |
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I love your poetry so much. I'm a romantic and so much of your work just makes me feel all warm and mushy inside lol. This poem blends together so smoothly and creates this wonderful sensation of complete bliss. I love it!
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12-May-04/6:43 PM |
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12-May-04/6:51 PM |
Awww...:'( I can relate so much to poems of this sort...
~10~deserves no less...
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12-May-04/6:58 PM |
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I like this poem, but it just doesn't seem to flow as well as the others. It seems as though you were pushing it a little too much.
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13-May-04/2:07 PM |
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I thought the poem was good up until the last stanza...I guess its just because I have a different outlook on life.
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13-May-04/2:20 PM |
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