Poemranker [Poem: no name] [by ~ska~] Thu Nov 21 15:34:06 PST 2024

no name (Free verse) by ~ska~

Your lookin for a way to win More than what you've already Lost from sin? Can't find the way, I know where you've been. Down the roads And the streets of cold. Trying to find love, Your lookin' the wrong way, It's right up above. Open up your arms, Don't be afraid, He'll keep you from harms evil way.

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.7615943
Overall Rank: 11578

Posted: August 25, 2003 7:42 PM PDT; Last modified: August 25, 2003 7:42 PM PDT
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Comments:

[2] Bill Z Bub @ 24.43.45.248 | 25-Aug-03/9:33 PM | Reply

I refuse to worship the god of Job. And I was going to curse at you, but I realized you're probably just a very young silly person.
I have issues. Don't mind me.

[6] richa @ 81.86.231.15 | 26-Aug-03/4:16 AM | Reply

too prosaic really, nothing new.

I quite like the rhyme of the first three lines, flows well.

[5] cuddlytiger17 @ 64.80.246.102 | 10-May-04/1:27 PM | Reply

I don't know, certain parts just don't seem to fit together right...It seems like you tried a little too hard or something...

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