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no name (Free verse) by ~ska~

Your lookin for a way to win More than what you've already Lost from sin? Can't find the way, I know where you've been. Down the roads And the streets of cold. Trying to find love, Your lookin' the wrong way, It's right up above. Open up your arms, Don't be afraid, He'll keep you from harms evil way.

richa 26-Aug-03/4:16 AM
too prosaic really, nothing new.

I quite like the rhyme of the first three lines, flows well.




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