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Graffito Murder (Free verse) by Don-Quixote
My ruby red diamond sparkles between my teeth as I drink slowly the whisky that burns my throut. Staring at the words I wrote on the wall, in graffiti colors and style, laughter rolls from my tongue, thinking why in the hell I wrote that shit.. A drunken fit explodes and my switchblade meets the concrete causing sparks to fly. I wonder why my knife won't sink into the wall. Hearing the police call, I stroll off into the darkness, leaving the knife scratchmarks as my calling card.

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.0
Weighted score: 4.642391
Overall Rank: 12329
Posted: August 23, 2003 5:51 AM PDT; Last modified: August 23, 2003 5:51 AM PDT
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[n/a] Don-Quixote @ 204.31.170.157 | 23-Aug-03/6:01 AM | Reply
I know you thought you were gonna see some gore, but no.. i cheated you! just to be an asshole. ;)
[7] cuddlytiger17 @ 64.80.246.102 | 10-May-04/1:11 PM | Reply
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