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blink (Free verse) by VorioBuche
Holding close to the raindrops,
the seagull's shit and moon's damp wit,
Mars passes like constipation, on contemplation
noting the elation of blood on the roof.
Drops falling slowly on the sidewalk in the rhythm
of steam engines over rotten tracks,
of chilled ball bearings through sleeping backs.
So there is one night that never ends,
the rest are preparation, imitation,
facsimiles of creation poured from baking sores
in the autumn sun. Winter waits at the door
sucking frozen chocolate, wounded and ironic
in the falling snow. Spring's the dream,
Always remembered, sometimes lived, tasting
of dried mint leaves and absynthe. Summer's bored
through geologic remainders of indifference
and elation, cold and restored along the bank
teller's bible, a fable ending with a rainy park
the lame absence of a stork.
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Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5860
Posted: August 21, 2003 10:52 PM PDT; Last modified: August 21, 2003 10:52 PM PDT
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