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paint brush (Free verse) by highnightmaregurl
I keep my paint brush with me
whereever I may go,
In case I need to cover up
So the Real me doesn't show.
I'm so afraid to show you me
afraid of what you'll do--thatyou might laugh or say mean things.
I'm afraid I might lose you.
I'd like to remove all my paint coats
to show you the real, true me,
but I want you to try and understand
I need you to accept what you see.
So if you 'll be patient and close your eyes
I'll strip off all my coats real slow.
Please understand how much it hurts
To let the real me show.
Now my coats are all stripped off.
I feel naked, bare and cold,
And if you still love me with all that you see,
You are my friend, pure as gold.
I need to save my paint brush though,
And hold in my hand,
I want to keep it handy,
In case sombody doesnt understand.
So please protect me, my dear friend
And thanks for loveing me true,
But please let me keep my paint brush with me
Until I love me, too.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5859
Posted: August 14, 2003 6:21 PM PDT; Last modified: August 14, 2003 6:21 PM PDT
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