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Material Things (Free verse) by thatgirlaquarius
Why is it so important to have alot of things what good is it if you never know the joy love brings Focusing on prosperity and wealth forgetting about our heart and soul Losing more and more of ourself Look at all the rich people they sure don't look so happy They long for the love you can't buy anywhere so inside they are empty When you die you cannot take with you your many prized possessions But love is yours no matter what so be good to yourself and learn a lesson...

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5860
Posted: October 3, 2003 8:22 PM PDT; Last modified: October 3, 2003 8:22 PM PDT
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[n/a] poetandknowit @ 65.100.176.33 | 3-Oct-03/9:40 PM | Reply
Rockmage would dig this because it breaks the rules of function. A sentence ended? No period, but a capital. Numerous times. And the ellipsoidal to suggest that the thought is infinite. Genius. I want what you guys are smoking.
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