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At least (Lyric) by Miggy
At least I told the truth At least I got to try Even though I understood Why I just can’t be that guy Hope will not vanish After things fall apart Just need someone out there To fill the emptiness of my heart (Chorus) Sometimes you rescue the girl But she doesn’t see your face You can’t let the fate of the world Depend on who you’re trying to embrace At least it doesn’t hurt At least the future's still here Yet I feel that I exposed What’s known as my deepest fear Priorities can’t be mixed No matter how needed the cure Must move on to a new life Before my actions end up demure (Chorus) No disappointment Can’t break down in tears No second chances Just an everlasting sky of clear (Chorus/Ending)

Up the ladder: Good King Brownceslas
Down the ladder: Persephone

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.2727275
Weighted score: 6.1363635
Overall Rank: 1086
Posted: October 9, 2004 9:08 AM PDT; Last modified: October 9, 2004 9:14 AM PDT
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[9] cuddlytiger17 @ 209.105.136.128 | 9-Oct-04/3:49 PM | Reply
I really liked it. Good job. The last line of the chorus didn't flow right for me though, but that's just my opinion.
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