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Peeping Through The Window (Limerick) by Edna Sweetlove I peeped through the toilet window
And my mummy gave me a good show
I saw her fat pussy
It was nice and juicy
I'd loved to have giv'n it a go.
Up the ladder:
Shy, quiet
Down the ladder:
Good King Brownceslas
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Posted: May 16, 2006 5:23 AM PDT; Last modified: May 16, 2006 5:23 AM PDTWeighted score: 6.1363635 Overall Rank: 1084 Comments:
Awkward rhythm, Edna. It doesn't roll off the tongue as well as it should (for instance, you're forcing us to read "the toilet winDOW", which doesn't work).
Bollocks to you. This is genius. If you don't think so you are dim.
Well, darn. Sucks to be me.
You are a cerebral cripple.
Christ, that was a piping hot plate full of rope trajectory.
Piss off.
Jesus WORSHIPS this!
I love a juicy pussy.
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Pussy/juicy? I'd rather have seen front/blunt.