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Peeping Through The Window (Limerick) by Edna Sweetlove

I peeped through the toilet window And my mummy gave me a good show I saw her fat pussy It was nice and juicy I'd loved to have giv'n it a go.

Niphredil 16-May-06/5:34 AM
Awkward rhythm, Edna. It doesn't roll off the tongue as well as it should (for instance, you're forcing us to read "the toilet winDOW", which doesn't work).




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