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Ephemeral (Free verse) by shit
As the sun shall I rise As a miracle shall I happen Like a flake of snowy white, Like a knife shall I threaten As the storm shall I be, Like a scorpion in the night, Like a rose forever bleed, A raven staring at the sky, As a raindrop shall I fall, As a child shall I dream, Like the night encover all In her comforting realm, As a planet shall I spin Then lay tired on your lap, Like a tattoo on your skin, A memory only you caress, As a star shall I shine Innocence faded will re-glow Carry away tears of your eyes Cause as a river I will flow, As a cloud shall I pass As a letter must be sent Like a labourer I will rest Much like this poem shall I end.

Up the ladder: Dying
Down the ladder: A Wedding Present

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6666665
Weighted score: 5.0794687
Overall Rank: 6434
Posted: July 16, 2004 8:58 AM PDT; Last modified: July 16, 2004 8:58 AM PDT
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[7] donmiguel1960 @ 68.96.168.211 | 16-Jul-04/9:00 AM | Reply
consider changing the last stansa
[10] cuddlytiger17 @ 209.105.158.116 | 16-Jul-04/8:25 PM | Reply
I really like this poem. The images are phenomenal. :)
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