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rear end of the storm (Other) by malpaso
I danced outdoors to catch the rain
Or bet that it wouldn't catch me.
She said it'd rain soon but then you never think it will happen to you.
Pearl grey skies, slight breeze,
my first mile along the winding, snaking
figure-8 road when the wind blasts with
sound like waterfall or river through the trees.
And I feel the first drops the downpour and
big, brave me under a tree, watches Nature's shadowplay,
Oklahoma drama and, during a station break, the rain slows
and reprieved,walk on. Duck in again under another kind
tree. Test the rain's resolve, beseach 'come on, enough already!' Walk
another mile. Wet, soaked.
I awake to take up where I left off...I danced
outdoors to catch the rain. It caught me.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6666665
Weighted score: 5.0794687
Overall Rank: 6457
Posted: June 10, 2007 6:38 PM PDT; Last modified: June 10, 2007 6:38 PM PDT
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