poemranker ::The Precious Thing by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.

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Free verse № 10228

The Precious Thing

by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.

Member since 2002 · Posted 20 Aug 2002 · Edited 20 Aug 2002 · 11 comments

The sly beggar slips his hand into the urinal and, fingers dr i p p ing, retrieves the mint.

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11 comments

[4] Lenore 20-Aug-02/8:20 PM Reply
Always with the soft white under-belly, someone's got to do it.
[7] Frass 20-Aug-02/10:09 PM Reply
I give you phlegm hockers shite on this site; but, this I like. It falls loosely into the category of social commentary.
[0] Jarah 20-Aug-02/10:23 PM Reply
OH yeah! That was the best thing ive ever seen! Bravo BRavo! BRAVO! give it a fucking standing ovation.. u say my poem sucks at least it makes sense all of urs are pointless.. and have no meaning.. u need to stop pretending.. at least i dont go around this site swingin my balls like im the best..
[n/a] poetandknowit 20-Aug-02/10:28 PM Reply
Don't you have school tomorrow? Go to bed. Quit sneaking around all pissed off because no one likes your poem. Don't you get it. When you run to this guy's poem and yap at him, you lose. That is what he wants you to do. You know like a mouse to a trap. So just suck it up and move on to posting your next poem. Most writers rely on more than one prize winning poem to carry them.
[6] <~> 21-Aug-02/12:11 AM Reply
you sly beggar. slipping it in, once again, and freshness counts! jubilant use of 'shape', and motion.
[7] Christof 22-Aug-02/2:46 AM Reply
Bizarrely, I find this quite moving as well as funny.
[7] Venus 22-Aug-02/11:25 AM Reply
Hits all the right angles, and then dangles, just so. 7/10
[7] anagram 22-Aug-02/11:52 AM Reply
Very good 7.
[10] cuddlytiger17 15-May-04/4:09 PM Reply
lmao nice!
[10] T. Jonathron Remp 22-Jul-05/10:36 AM Reply
two dr
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[10] T. Jonathron Remp › T. Jonathron Remp 22-Jul-05/10:36 AM Reply
yeah that didn't work