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The Precious Thing (Free verse) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
The sly beggar slips his hand into the urinal and, fingers dr i p p ing, retrieves the mint.

Up the ladder: Not right now
Down the ladder: Incomplete

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.84
Weighted score: 6.8276854
Overall Rank: 349
Posted: August 20, 2002 5:56 PM PDT; Last modified: August 20, 2002 6:02 PM PDT
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Comments:
[4] Lenore @ 64.252.100.33 | 20-Aug-02/8:20 PM | Reply
Always with the soft white under-belly, someone's got to do it.
[7] Frass @ 138.88.42.6 | 20-Aug-02/10:09 PM | Reply
I give you phlegm hockers shite on this site; but, this I like. It falls loosely into the category of social commentary.
[0] Jarah @ 24.164.123.105 | 20-Aug-02/10:23 PM | Reply
OH yeah! That was the best thing ive ever seen! Bravo BRavo! BRAVO! give it a fucking standing ovation.. u say my poem sucks at least it makes sense all of urs are pointless.. and have no meaning.. u need to stop pretending.. at least i dont go around this site swingin my balls like im the best..
[n/a] poetandknowit @ 65.101.211.191 | 20-Aug-02/10:28 PM | Reply
Don't you have school tomorrow? Go to bed. Quit sneaking around all pissed off because no one likes your poem. Don't you get it. When you run to this guy's poem and yap at him, you lose. That is what he wants you to do. You know like a mouse to a trap. So just suck it up and move on to posting your next poem. Most writers rely on more than one prize winning poem to carry them.
[6] <~> @ 24.44.185.41 | 21-Aug-02/12:11 AM | Reply
you sly beggar. slipping it in, once again, and freshness counts! jubilant use of 'shape', and motion.
[7] Christof @ 195.172.133.226 | 22-Aug-02/2:46 AM | Reply
Bizarrely, I find this quite moving as well as funny.
[7] Venus @ 152.163.204.61 | 22-Aug-02/11:25 AM | Reply
Hits all the right angles, and then dangles, just so. 7/10
[7] anagram @ 195.92.168.167 | 22-Aug-02/11:52 AM | Reply
Very good 7.
[10] cuddlytiger17 @ 64.80.244.159 | 15-May-04/4:09 PM | Reply
lmao nice!
[10] T. Jonathron Remp @ 128.252.229.185 | 22-Jul-05/10:36 AM | Reply
two dr
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ing thumbs up! -10-
[10] T. Jonathron Remp @ 128.252.229.185 > T. Jonathron Remp | 22-Jul-05/10:36 AM | Reply
yeah that didn't work
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