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The Precious Thing (Free verse) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.

The sly beggar slips his hand into the urinal and, fingers dr i p p ing, retrieves the mint.

poetandknowit 20-Aug-02/10:28 PM
Don't you have school tomorrow? Go to bed. Quit sneaking around all pissed off because no one likes your poem. Don't you get it. When you run to this guy's poem and yap at him, you lose. That is what he wants you to do. You know like a mouse to a trap. So just suck it up and move on to posting your next poem. Most writers rely on more than one prize winning poem to carry them.




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