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Not right now (Pimple) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
sing., sing., mood ring show, the, world. my feelings rip, out, my insides Show, what, I hide ding., ding., door bell ring i'm not, answering bury, me. in, my, grave just can't face. to, today shake., shake., glass break another mess., i make same, old., story tell vomit on myself scream., scream., bad dream wake up., bleeding knife in my, back i, love, you, back

Up the ladder: epicentre
Down the ladder: The Precious Thing

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.8636365
Weighted score: 6.8301167
Overall Rank: 348
Posted: July 23, 2003 6:41 PM PDT; Last modified: July 23, 2003 6:41 PM PDT
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[5] DJCARTER @ 80.205.204.107 | 23-Jul-03/7:27 PM | Reply
can't say i really enjoyed it... seems more like a child written poem
[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.21.223 > DJCARTER | 23-Jul-03/7:51 PM | Reply
Thats cool, thats sorta the way I wanted it.
[6] Craychus @ 202.156.2.91 | 24-Jul-03/4:39 AM | Reply
for some reason, that amused me :) i like it!
[9] lunar @ 195.92.67.67 | 18-Aug-03/11:43 AM | Reply
hey this is really, really good - maybe coz im stoned it seems to really speak to me wow a 9.
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