poemranker ::Not right now by thepinkbunnyofdoom

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Not right now

Member since 2003 · Posted 23 Jul 2003 · 4 comments

sing., sing., mood ring show, the, world. my feelings rip, out, my insides Show, what, I hide ding., ding., door bell ring i'm not, answering bury, me. in, my, grave just can't face. to, today shake., shake., glass break another mess., i make same, old., story tell vomit on myself scream., scream., bad dream wake up., bleeding knife in my, back i, love, you, back

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4 comments

[5] DJCARTER 23-Jul-03/7:27 PM Reply
can't say i really enjoyed it... seems more like a child written poem
[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom › DJCARTER 23-Jul-03/7:51 PM Reply
Thats cool, thats sorta the way I wanted it.
[6] Craychus 24-Jul-03/4:39 AM Reply
for some reason, that amused me :) i like it!
[9] lunar 18-Aug-03/11:43 AM Reply
hey this is really, really good - maybe coz im stoned it seems to really speak to me wow a 9.