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Not right now (Pimple) by thepinkbunnyofdoom

sing., sing., mood ring show, the, world. my feelings rip, out, my insides Show, what, I hide ding., ding., door bell ring i'm not, answering bury, me. in, my, grave just can't face. to, today shake., shake., glass break another mess., i make same, old., story tell vomit on myself scream., scream., bad dream wake up., bleeding knife in my, back i, love, you, back

lunar 18-Aug-03/11:43 AM
hey this is really, really good - maybe coz im stoned it seems to really speak to me wow a 9.




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