regarding some deleted poem...	10-Oct-02/2:52 AM
This is great. The senses are thoroughly stroked and stoked. All this beautiful abundance!
Re: Walk in a dream (an ode to self help poems) by Bachus	10-Oct-02/2:58 AM
You didn't really need the last bit. It was quite realistically satirical as it was.
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Oct-02/4:18 AM
This is much better. Traditional but well done. I don't hold the 'garbage' comment against you.
Re: Safe Distance, 10-10-02 by Frass	11-Oct-02/1:41 AM
It must be strange, knwoing someone who's a victim of this weirdo. Thanks for your comment by the way - I don't know why 'Instructions to a Sculptor' has taken off in the way it has, but it makes me happy!
Re: Kindling by <~>	15-Oct-02/7:28 AM
This is beautiful. The rhythms are languorous like a long winter night, which I suppose is just what you meant. 'loose and smiling' is he? I just bet he is.
Re: Bowstones, 21st June 200 by Nicholas Jones	15-Oct-02/7:30 AM
Yes are good at sens eof palce, and tying it in with personal reminiscence to come up with something really resonant. Really strong.
Re: Breeze by Nicholas Jones	15-Oct-02/7:32 AM
very suggestive and neutral (in a good way)
Re: simple silence by daniella	15-Oct-02/7:38 AM
Oh yes, this is great. pared down to the finest possible point.
Re: why i look like a man by rosiebailey	15-Oct-02/7:49 AM
Rosie - this is the future. Youa re a visionary.
Re: unlucky by rosiebailey	15-Oct-02/7:52 AM
You could at least have rhymed the third couplet! You have an unfortunate life. Are you still a man?
Re: our morning bed by daniella	15-Oct-02/7:54 AM
This is great. I'm really enjoying your stuff, Daniella. The fragility of these images catches at the throat.
Re: where once by daniella	15-Oct-02/7:56 AM
I like the transformation imagery and the idea of life changing and the constant drive of fertility.
Re: cornered invitation by daniella	15-Oct-02/7:58 AM
Very good - really rather erotic, i find, in a blitzed out way. Should 'them on the corner' be 'they'? Never mind. I love the sweat and the flesh of this.
Re: words our Father by daniella	15-Oct-02/8:00 AM
What is the madness? The faith or the doubt of the faith? I don't quite get this.
Re: a t i m e by daniella	15-Oct-02/8:02 AM
You really know how to write about loss and longing. This one brings back all kinds of lost moments for me and I can feel exactly what you mean. I think your poems are great and this is my favourite.
Re: Rummage Sales by jessicazee	15-Oct-02/9:35 AM
I like the progression of this from street to street - there's something very solemn about the ending, the seriousness of leisure.
Re: One Country by poetandknowit	15-Oct-02/9:38 AM
I'm sorry, I don't know enough Spanish (or indeed any Spanish) and so parts of this are completely opaque to me. But then I guess it's not for me, is it Mrs God? How things have blossomed since I've been away! Oh and happy birthday P&K - I turn 29 next week.
Re: d e e p e r by daniella	15-Oct-02/9:42 AM
If it reminds me of any Beatle it's George - 'Within You Without You', that kind of thing.
regarding some deleted poem...	16-Oct-02/2:26 AM
Top stuff. Some chaps like to keep their dry goods dry but they're jsut fooling themselves. Also, I like your metal and bluegrass tastes. The banjo is a fine fine instrument and I may work on a way to cross-breed bluegrass and metal- metalgrass? Anyway, it would be fantastic.
Re: a genius by moonUnit	16-Oct-02/2:29 AM
This is very direct, though I don't really understand the first/second love part - is that you? Or someone else? Anyway, you should forget this person and move on, you'll be happier.