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words our Father (Other) by daniella
words our Father
placed through our heart
and in our hand,
straight there where we can see.
why will it not go through?
He must wonder from time to His scratch of infinite time
what's causing them the fear.
and yes, i drop down on my knees
and at least again I feel Him closer here.
going to and from the book
i rise up,
my senses climb a bit
over the ridge of this madness.
cause i know these words, like mother,
which sing our Father rings true.
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.6
Weighted score: 4.833116
Overall Rank: 10788
Posted: September 2, 2002 1:28 PM PDT; Last modified: October 14, 2002 10:19 PM PDT
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