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words our Father

by daniella

Member since 2002 · Posted 2 Sep 2002 · Edited 14 Oct 2002 · 2 comments

words our Father placed through our heart and in our hand, straight there where we can see. why will it not go through? He must wonder from time to His scratch of infinite time what's causing them the fear. and yes, i drop down on my knees and at least again I feel Him closer here. going to and from the book i rise up, my senses climb a bit over the ridge of this madness. cause i know these words, like mother, which sing our Father rings true.

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[n/a] god'swife 14-Oct-02/11:52 PM Reply
This is perhaps too personal for me to appreciate. I lose myself towards the middle and continue lost til the end.
[5] Christof 15-Oct-02/8:00 AM Reply
What is the madness? The faith or the doubt of the faith? I don't quite get this.