| Re: A Musical Dream by vulcan |
7-Oct-02/8:28 AM |
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I don't know much about Verdi, but this captures what impression I do have of it. Mysterious, heavy. Great
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| Re: From a letter (never sent) by UnityMitford |
7-Oct-02/8:30 AM |
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Stay away from the corners! Stay in the middle of the ring...Love as a constant battle. Well, how true.
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| Re: From a letter (never sent) by UnityMitford |
7-Oct-02/8:30 AM |
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By the way, is Unity Mitford the one who went to Germany?
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| Re: Beyond Imagination by vulcan |
7-Oct-02/8:32 AM |
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ACtually the ambiguity is great here, it's hard to get a handle on preicsely what's going on with the 'kitty', and the feeling of loss is somehow reflected in that
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| Re: The day I told her by dalva |
7-Oct-02/8:36 AM |
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That takes guts... Good luck in the future.
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| Re: Midnight Dream by Katie |
7-Oct-02/8:38 AM |
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Maybe the Internet is a good place for the imagination to run free? I don't know. But you'd better hope Mum & Dad don't find out. They won't be keen on that kind of imaginative release.
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| Re: Bottom by ThoughtfulSoul |
7-Oct-02/8:47 AM |
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You need to punctuate and also it should be 'there are people' in line 2. I really do get the impression of your thoughts echoing around though.
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9-Oct-02/4:02 AM |
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The best ones always come quickly. 'Instructions to a Sculptor' took me five minutes and it's my greatest hit! This is great. Click clickety click
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9-Oct-02/4:06 AM |
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Much looser and more discursive than your stuff usually is. I like the contemplative mood of this, the story it tells,
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9-Oct-02/4:08 AM |
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Very sensitive to a boy's coming of age and the problems it brings. You really are a student of men aren't you?
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9-Oct-02/4:14 AM |
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This is a difficult read - maybe fewer exclamtion marks and declarations would help?
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| Re: Obsessions by Nicholas Jones |
9-Oct-02/4:15 AM |
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Sophie Ellis Bextor? Don't get hung up on geometry.
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| Re: one is leaving as i enter by Limness |
9-Oct-02/4:17 AM |
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Because as flies to boys are we to the gods; they kill us for their sport.
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10-Oct-02/1:49 AM |
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Delicious indeed. You get so much mileage from such a simple scenario. The combination of powerful sensuality with the loss of dignity is potent.
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10-Oct-02/2:34 AM |
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I think he's being sarcastic. And it's oh so funny.
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| Re: why? by little_angel_maria |
10-Oct-02/2:38 AM |
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This is a terrible story. You really should get some help from somewhere. Listen to god'swife's advice.
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| Re: Essential Love by unknown |
10-Oct-02/2:39 AM |
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This comes over like a rap, good rhythms.
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| Re: Nature by Reuben Spiteri |
10-Oct-02/2:41 AM |
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Perhaps you could lose the last line? Your love of nature comes through loud and clear and the last line just seems to spoil your structure.
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| Re: ITS A SHAMBLES by lukehanney |
10-Oct-02/2:46 AM |
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This is just how football should be. Muck and pies and hopelessness. It should be 'affiliated', but I don't care a rat's arse about the inversion.
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| Re: Bishop Stortford by cacophony |
10-Oct-02/2:50 AM |
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I had a similar experience when I fell asleep on the train and woke up in Reading. I don't know where Bishop Stortford is, though. Ace.
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