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Bishop Stortford (Free verse) by cacophony
In a world a million miles from my own I huddle into the multi-coloured material Red, green, grey and blue And wish I was a vagrant With no place to go And nowhere better to be Not a fool on the wrong train Where is Bishop Stortford?

Up the ladder: The Boy
Down the ladder: The Fragrance

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.285714
Weighted score: 4.807899
Overall Rank: 11029
Posted: October 9, 2002 12:22 PM PDT; Last modified: October 9, 2002 12:22 PM PDT
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[8] Christof @ 195.172.133.226 | 10-Oct-02/2:50 AM | Reply
I had a similar experience when I fell asleep on the train and woke up in Reading. I don't know where Bishop Stortford is, though. Ace.
[n/a] cacophony @ 62.252.224.6 > Christof | 12-Oct-02/5:23 AM | Reply
Unfortunately I can't fall back on sleep as an excuse - sheer stupidity was my downfall.
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