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From a letter (never sent) (Free verse) by UnityMitford You know I love you
because I constantly
push you into corners.
But this
you will say
is not love.
Up the ladder:
Wind Elemental
Down the ladder:
Ode to my mentor
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Posted: October 7, 2002 5:54 AM PDT; Last modified: October 23, 2002 8:23 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.9444447 Overall Rank: 9002 Comments:
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blackball @ 131.162.166.103
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7-Oct-02/6:03 AM
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that's good. are the corners real or metaphorical...cuz if they're real theniwould agree with the lover; it would not be love...but if metaphorical...it makes for a good poem. i'm out 8/10
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UnityMitford @ 167.206.181.179
> blackball
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7-Oct-02/6:42 AM
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metaphorical (from what i remember).
i love it when you get rough, unity.
Stay away from the corners! Stay in the middle of the ring...Love as a constant battle. Well, how true.
By the way, is Unity Mitford the one who went to Germany?
I am.
And what did you do when you got there? Did you hang out with the Fuhrer?
i think she went in the back room with him and his dog. she is naughty.
But he loved Eva! How could he!
he had that hulking Alsatian and the riding crop. they both glistened when i was through.
Apparently Eva was a disaster in the Alsatian and riding crop department. No wonder he was so pleased to see you. the way your combed your hair all straight and precise.... an Aryan dictator's dream.
indeed.
'Few people know that to please her lover, Eva Braun combed her pussy hair to one side.' -- George Carlin.
he hung out with me.
describe 'hung'
You ever talk to your sisters?
stop reading about me on the internet. and no, i'm long dead.
Well excuse me, some of us have heard about you from elsewhere than the Internet. Pardon me.
Yes actually, how annoying. Why call yourself Unity Mitford and come on to the site and get huffy when people try to probe you about why you have chosen that name? Assuming that people that will not heard of U Mitford as well - does it annoy you that someone actually has? Oh, why has this rattled my cage. Maybe I don't like it when I realise someone doesn't want to join in with my little game. Bleagh. But anyway. Don't be so sniffy.
i'm joining your little game, young boy. don't be so sensitive or i'll
Ugh. Sorry. Now I'm embarrassed. It's been a long hard day and I'm taking things the wrong way. I missed the irony of your last comment.
long hard day? it's only noon where i am. where are you? you didn't take anything the wrong way, by the way (well, maybe a little). it's taken quite a toll, all this.
I'm in London and it's time to go home! At last. So you see, i have an excuse for my tetchiness. many apologies.
Don't be so sensitive or you'll what?
To the point. Powerful. Honest. You did it right. Keep up the good work.
Alright who is Unity?
Sometimes those who we most love, we most hurt, because we feel that we must share with them what we feel to be true.
very nice. 8
no..it's tether ball with the smurfs in a raquetball court somwhere in ranchocucomunga, cuz if it's noon it's west coast..here.here..toast!
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