Nature

Member since 2002 · Posted 1 Oct 2002 · 3 comments

Inhaling the air, Giving it back it again, Soaked all over As I'm touched by Rain Feeling the Heat As the sun chooses me Giving it back again As the wind takes it away Oh, I wanna be, The wind As a spirit I'll fly The Rain As I drop through the sky The Sun As all darkness I'll tear The Wind As I'll be everywhere Nature... Thank you

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[7] vulcan 8-Oct-02/12:28 AM Reply

7/10!Asia?we're friends I suppose!

[7] devina 10-Oct-02/2:37 AM Reply

Good poem.... I liked it a lot...

[7] Christof 10-Oct-02/2:41 AM Reply

Perhaps you could lose the last line? Your love of nature comes through loud and clear and the last line just seems to spoil your structure.