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Drunken note #2 (Free verse) by blackball once again
fallen angel
wincing host
threefold lies
naked against pattern
block rising
above knowledge
gone before
judgement
you are unknown
and waiting
drink up
to sustain love
you've lasted
this long
without sense
of direction
find purpose
beneath saintly arrogance
fly to me
unleashed and waiting
for the coherent state
to allow for such feelings
fly unannounced
Up the ladder:
Nature
Down the ladder:
Spontaneous Combustion/The Moth
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Posted: October 6, 2002 10:35 AM PDT; Last modified: October 6, 2002 10:35 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.899147 Overall Rank: 9879 Comments:
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Jigg @ 66.119.34.39
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6-Oct-02/5:38 PM
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Well this is just utter garbage I mean where was the structure and the meter?...Oh good Lord no this just shan't do...no wait on second read thru...no genius...absolute genius...(Irony Irony Irony) as before love your work...another 10 will do me, Tommy
Pay no attention to jigg. I'm not usually one for this strucure, but damn fine work.
Well sir, I like it. I certainly do.
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