Drunken note #2

Member since 2002 · Posted 6 Oct 2002 · 3 comments

once again fallen angel wincing host threefold lies naked against pattern block rising above knowledge gone before judgement you are unknown and waiting drink up to sustain love you've lasted this long without sense of direction find purpose beneath saintly arrogance fly to me unleashed and waiting for the coherent state to allow for such feelings fly unannounced

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[10] Jigg 6-Oct-02/5:38 PM Reply

Well this is just utter garbage I mean where was the structure and the meter?...Oh good Lord no this just shan't do...no wait on second read thru...no genius...absolute genius...(Irony Irony Irony) as before love your work...another 10 will do me, Tommy

[8] razorgrin 9-Oct-02/7:05 AM Reply

Pay no attention to jigg. I'm not usually one for this strucure, but damn fine work.

[7] Bill Z Bub 28-Nov-02/3:55 PM Reply

Well sir, I like it. I certainly do.