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Drunken note #2 (Free verse) by blackball

once again fallen angel wincing host threefold lies naked against pattern block rising above knowledge gone before judgement you are unknown and waiting drink up to sustain love you've lasted this long without sense of direction find purpose beneath saintly arrogance fly to me unleashed and waiting for the coherent state to allow for such feelings fly unannounced

razorgrin 9-Oct-02/7:05 AM
Pay no attention to jigg. I'm not usually one for this strucure, but damn fine work.




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