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Nature (Free verse) by Reuben Spiteri

Inhaling the air, Giving it back it again, Soaked all over As I'm touched by Rain Feeling the Heat As the sun chooses me Giving it back again As the wind takes it away Oh, I wanna be, The wind As a spirit I'll fly The Rain As I drop through the sky The Sun As all darkness I'll tear The Wind As I'll be everywhere Nature... Thank you

Christof 10-Oct-02/2:41 AM
Perhaps you could lose the last line? Your love of nature comes through loud and clear and the last line just seems to spoil your structure.




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