Breeze

by Nicholas Jones

Member since 2002 · Posted 11 Oct 2002 · 6 comments

From dark to clear skies - I watch them empty for me Grey becomes flecked blue

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6 comments

[7] god'swife 11-Oct-02/8:18 AM Reply

The middle line speaks to me on several levels, suprisingly. I'm in a sensitive mood.

[7] Christof 15-Oct-02/7:32 AM Reply

very suggestive and neutral (in a good way)

[n/a] Nicholas Jones › Christof 16-Oct-02/6:41 AM Reply

Thank you Mr Christof for your helpful and positive comments. This came because all I can see through the window from my desk is the sky. I was trying to write an essay on poetic responses to industrial Wales, but this happened instead.

[8] -=SeTTle=- 17-Nov-02/7:41 PM Reply

YOU'RE SISTER, THITHTER, MISTAH.

[8] horus8 25-Jan-03/12:52 AM Reply

tremendous.

[10] 7!3 28-Nov-04/1:28 PM Reply

i like how each line means the same thing, and yet you make it sound so beautiful. it's a peace poem. a nice breeze :)