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Breeze (Haiku) by Nicholas Jones

From dark to clear skies - I watch them empty for me Grey becomes flecked blue

7!3 28-Nov-04/1:28 PM
i like how each line means the same thing, and yet you make it sound so beautiful. it's a peace poem. a nice breeze :)




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