Re: Amputation by Enkidu	LilMsLadyPoet 205.188.116.69	31-Jul-05/7:09 AM
Giggled at this one!
Re: Child Shaped Adult by http://mulberryfairy	LilMsLadyPoet 205.188.116.69	31-Jul-05/7:07 AM
I liked this one! Th ending was kind of unexpected and abrupt, though.
Re: BY ALL YOUR HEART by prettyktm	LilMsLadyPoet 205.188.116.69	31-Jul-05/7:03 AM
too keep> to keep Coz> 'cause Do you love me like I do> implies, Do you love me like I love me? By all your heart> ? with all your heart? ( and, sweetie, he WILL say and promise anything and everything to get 'all of you', and in all probability he will not stand by your side forever; in fact, he may never speak to you again.)
Re: Weariness by Niphredil	LilMsLadyPoet 205.188.116.69	31-Jul-05/6:55 AM
I would change blanketing to blankets, and take out the comma after sky. Actually, I would take out all the punctuation, take out "and' and use "the flashes of light".
Re: Then what is the sleeve? by T. Jonathron Remp	LilMsLadyPoet 205.188.116.69	31-Jul-05/6:47 AM
Sorry...this thought was Far too free for me...so disconnected...too disconnected to make sense out of. My favorite line was> "The flesh-covered oven hovered as I sat And watched as they pried the g from the front of the gnat" Although I wouldn't have used AS two times, and perhaps would have shortened the line with a word change here or there.
Re: Thoughts by drnick	LilMsLadyPoet 205.188.116.69	31-Jul-05/6:39 AM
hmm..cathy little thing...yeah, I like it well enough. Doesn't Intellectual have two l's?
Re: A rhyme with no place to go. by darby pyn	LilMsLadyPoet 205.188.116.69	31-Jul-05/6:35 AM
'malignant palms squeeze saturation hieroglyphic masturbation.' This line about graffiti is awesome! This is a strange poem, with layers that warrant repeated reads. I read it several times, and it grew on me more each time. Good job. Actually, it would make great lyrics I think!
Re: The Worst Poem Ever Created (edited) by drnick	LilMsLadyPoet 205.188.116.69	31-Jul-05/6:29 AM
I went to see what the links were, that Zodic posted..and yep! the 1st, 3rd, and 4th were right up there! Sorry drnick, it wasn't the worst poem ever written, but it comes close! (So, how do I vote? A high score would imply this is good? Or would imply it is the worst?) I think I will rank it for the worst...that is what my score will reflect!)
Re: Revisiting Old Wounds by ObiWonKn	LilMsLadyPoet 205.188.116.139	31-Jul-05/6:23 AM
Are you at the church, near a concert you missed, or couldn't get to?...some public event you are sad you couldn't be a part of? Is this about the Hunchback of Notre Dame, when he missed the OzzieFest? This would actually be pretty good, if you told us that specifically. The beginning is great, sets the scene, paints the picture...and then we say, "Huh?" with a puzzled look on our faces.I would have given this a higher score, had you cleared up the ending.
Re: a comment on Girlz by liljsmith87	LilMsLadyPoet 205.188.117.13	31-Jul-05/6:17 AM
Brittanyy...it does seem weird that you like this poem...uhm...constructive? OKAY! liljsmith87, YOU SHOULD NOT HAVE PICKED UP YOUR PENCIL OR PEN OR CRAYON. This is one of the worst things I have read in...uhm, forever. Sorry, but honest.
Re: a comment on End of Me by sonawrote	zodiac 212.38.134.51	31-Jul-05/2:07 AM
Oh. I thought ذهب and ذهبي were pretty much the only words for gold and golden, respectively. Where did you learn Arabic?
Re: a comment on Polar Bearings by impert&ent	zodiac 212.38.134.51	31-Jul-05/1:49 AM
That's not what you said. Consider this: I am sitting about six inches from my cup of coffee. Can a line be drawn around the Earth which passes between us? Yes. An infinite number can.
Re: a comment on THE HANDS OF THE CLOCK by prettyktm	zodiac 212.38.134.51	31-Jul-05/1:47 AM
Is English your native language?
Re: Weariness by Niphredil	Dovina 62.212.120.118	30-Jul-05/10:20 PM
Like sleeping beneath a volcano.
Re: End of Me by sonawrote	sonawrote 64.12.116.197	30-Jul-05/11:30 AM
الآراء العدي٠ة القي٠ة وفيرة تحت السّ٠وات, I need no arabic lessons.....Sona comes from Arabic for Gold!
Re: a comment on SO DON'T GIVE UP ON YOUR LOVE by prettyktm	prettyktm 203.115.81.186	29-Jul-05/11:21 PM
Love is something I am looking out for.as for searching it in my eyes.well you need to fly down to india for that.take care
Re: a comment on THE HANDS OF THE CLOCK by prettyktm	prettyktm 203.115.81.186	29-Jul-05/11:01 PM
HA HA HA,I don't know what made you send this comment to me.but if you are a writer [like me] than let me tell you this.that some times writing is much save and easy task to do then [f....]coz you just need to use your brains.take care
Re: a love not meant to be by nentwined	http://mulberryfairy 216.195.165.75	29-Jul-05/10:45 PM
nice job- you really captured the simultaneous hope and awareness of flaws that we bring to relationships
Re: I want to slit my wrist and call it poetry by thepinkbunnyofdoom	drnick 24.247.124.75	29-Jul-05/10:58 AM
I must say I enjoyed this read. I gave you an 8, because nobody else had.
Re: Brighter by Miggy	drnick 24.247.124.75	29-Jul-05/10:49 AM
Boring, boring, boring. Too specific/personal and waaaaay too played-out a theme. Do you write songs for John Mayer? Take some drugs.