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Amputation (Free verse) by Enkidu
I cut my brother off today
He couldn't get a job
He wouldn't get a job
He shouldn't get a job
So I cut him off
My doctor said he'll be contagious
For the next three to fifty-seven years
My dentist said that my brother
Is a no-good lousy bum
I'm glad I cut him off before those symptoms showed
Besides, it only hurt for a little while
And I saved a load of money.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5776
Posted: July 29, 2005 3:47 PM PDT; Last modified: July 29, 2005 3:47 PM PDT
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