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SO DON'T GIVE UP ON YOUR LOVE (Free verse) by prettyktm
I could give you all of my love And all that I need from you Is your trust in me So don't you believe What people say I know there are few true ones You can count on your fingers But there are many Who will see you in pain So don't give up on your love When your mind is full of doubts Don't give up on your love When you hear nothing but lies Just put your trust in me Like you put the trust in you Just don't give up on your love Just look into my eyes You will find yourself inside And my true love in your eyes It takes a lot to build It takes a minute to destory Fools may fall in love But they live in paradise And our love isn't blind We made it with open eyes So don't give up love.

Up the ladder: Third person.
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.0
Weighted score: 4.642391
Overall Rank: 12366
Posted: July 21, 2005 9:59 PM PDT; Last modified: July 21, 2005 9:59 PM PDT
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Comments:
[3] Nuit @ 86.128.33.62 | 22-Jul-05/9:42 AM | Reply
Sorry to say this, but I think its boring. It flows nicely etc, but the content is the same drivel I've heard a thousand times before. Perhaps look at the subject from a different angle.
[n/a] prettyktm @ 203.115.81.186 > Nuit | 22-Jul-05/10:14 PM | Reply
THANK YOU,we all have our likes and dislike.thanks for your frank
comment.
[3] Dovina @ 84.173.251.118 | 24-Jul-05/6:56 AM | Reply
What a line of bull!! I've heard it all before!!
[n/a] prettyktm @ 203.115.81.186 > Dovina | 25-Jul-05/2:26 AM | Reply
Thanks for your comment and thanks for being frank.
[3] Dovina @ 212.71.114.134 > prettyktm | 25-Jul-05/6:38 AM | Reply
I mean, you`d have to show me a heap of love in your eyes to compensate for what I'm hearing from your pen.
[n/a] Stephen Robins @ 84.13.133.201 > Dovina | 25-Jul-05/11:42 AM | Reply
Dovina, only waddling middle adged lezzas with no confidence in their butch looks preface a comment with the expression "I mean".
[n/a] prettyktm @ 203.115.81.186 > Dovina | 29-Jul-05/11:21 PM | Reply
Love is something I am looking out for.as for searching it in my
eyes.well you need to fly down to india for that.take care
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