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SO DON'T GIVE UP ON YOUR LOVE

Member since 2005 · Posted 21 Jul 2005 · 7 comments

I could give you all of my love And all that I need from you Is your trust in me So don't you believe What people say I know there are few true ones You can count on your fingers But there are many Who will see you in pain So don't give up on your love When your mind is full of doubts Don't give up on your love When you hear nothing but lies Just put your trust in me Like you put the trust in you Just don't give up on your love Just look into my eyes You will find yourself inside And my true love in your eyes It takes a lot to build It takes a minute to destory Fools may fall in love But they live in paradise And our love isn't blind We made it with open eyes So don't give up love.

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7 comments

[3] Nuit 22-Jul-05/9:42 AM Reply

Sorry to say this, but I think its boring. It flows nicely etc, but the content is the same drivel I've heard a thousand times before. Perhaps look at the subject from a different angle.

[n/a] prettyktm › Nuit 22-Jul-05/10:14 PM Reply

THANK YOU,we all have our likes and dislike.thanks for your frank
comment.

[3] Dovina 24-Jul-05/6:56 AM Reply

What a line of bull!! I've heard it all before!!

[n/a] prettyktm › Dovina 25-Jul-05/2:26 AM Reply

Thanks for your comment and thanks for being frank.

[3] Dovina › prettyktm 25-Jul-05/6:38 AM Reply

I mean, you`d have to show me a heap of love in your eyes to compensate for what I'm hearing from your pen.

[n/a] Stephen Robins › Dovina 25-Jul-05/11:42 AM Reply

Dovina, only waddling middle adged lezzas with no confidence in their butch looks preface a comment with the expression "I mean".

[n/a] prettyktm › Dovina 29-Jul-05/11:21 PM Reply

Love is something I am looking out for.as for searching it in my
eyes.well you need to fly down to india for that.take care