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SO DON'T GIVE UP ON YOUR LOVE (Free verse) by prettyktm I could give you all of my love
And all that I need from you
Is your trust in me
So don't you believe
What people say
I know there are few true ones
You can count on your fingers
But there are many
Who will see you in pain
So don't give up on your love
When your mind is full of doubts
Don't give up on your love
When you hear nothing but lies
Just put your trust in me
Like you put the trust in you
Just don't give up on your love
Just look into my eyes
You will find yourself inside
And my true love in your eyes
It takes a lot to build
It takes a minute to destory
Fools may fall in love
But they live in paradise
And our love isn't blind
We made it with open eyes
So don't give up love.
Up the ladder:
Amateur excavators
Down the ladder:
The tender side.
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 2.0
Posted: July 21, 2005 9:59 PM PDT; Last modified: July 21, 2005 9:59 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.642391 Overall Rank: 12368 Comments:
What a line of bull!! I've heard it all before!!
Thanks for your comment and thanks for being frank.
I mean, you`d have to show me a heap of love in your eyes to compensate for what I'm hearing from your pen.
Dovina, only waddling middle adged lezzas with no confidence in their butch looks preface a comment with the expression "I mean".
Love is something I am looking out for.as for searching it in my
eyes.well you need to fly down to india for that.take care 173 view(s)
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