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SO DON'T GIVE UP ON YOUR LOVE (Free verse) by prettyktm

I could give you all of my love And all that I need from you Is your trust in me So don't you believe What people say I know there are few true ones You can count on your fingers But there are many Who will see you in pain So don't give up on your love When your mind is full of doubts Don't give up on your love When you hear nothing but lies Just put your trust in me Like you put the trust in you Just don't give up on your love Just look into my eyes You will find yourself inside And my true love in your eyes It takes a lot to build It takes a minute to destory Fools may fall in love But they live in paradise And our love isn't blind We made it with open eyes So don't give up love.

Dovina 25-Jul-05/6:38 AM
I mean, you`d have to show me a heap of love in your eyes to compensate for what I'm hearing from your pen.




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