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THE HANDS OF THE CLOCK (Free verse) by prettyktm
The hands of the clock Takes me back to the memory lane And the way the tears fall Each drop makes my heart cry out in pain I put all my trust in you And you stab me in the back You just said 'you love me' But you never prove Still like a fool I believe That you only love me Day by day,night after night I pray for you Till I realish That you won't be coming back You left me for good I was nothing for you It's too late,but I understood So now all that I have got Besides me.is your memories And my broken dreams.

Up the ladder: It destroyed my life
Down the ladder: Someone Who’ll Know

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Arithmetic Mean: 1.5
Weighted score: 4.8340096
Overall Rank: 10740
Posted: July 21, 2005 4:47 AM PDT; Last modified: July 21, 2005 4:47 AM PDT
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[3] Stephen Robins @ 84.13.133.201 | 25-Jul-05/11:32 AM | Reply
Richard Whiteley once told me to fuck off. I think he meant the message to be passed on to you from beyond the grave.
[n/a] prettyktm @ 203.115.81.186 > Stephen Robins | 29-Jul-05/11:01 PM | Reply
HA HA HA,I don't know what made you send this comment to me.but if you are a writer [like me] than let me tell you this.that some
times writing is much save and easy task to do then [f....]coz
you just need to use your brains.take care
[n/a] zodiac @ 212.38.134.51 > prettyktm | 31-Jul-05/1:47 AM | Reply
Is English your native language?
[n/a] prettyktm @ 203.115.81.186 > zodiac | 1-Aug-05/1:37 AM | Reply
NO I am an INDIAN and I live in the land of mystery called INDIA.
[n/a] zodiac @ 212.118.19.75 > prettyktm | 1-Aug-05/10:37 PM | Reply
Really? Why don't you talk-talk in double-double language like other Indians?
[n/a] prettyktm @ 203.115.81.186 > zodiac | 2-Aug-05/12:33 AM | Reply
HI,I can talk and understand the language of love and peace.
take care.
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