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THE HANDS OF THE CLOCK (Free verse) by prettyktm

The hands of the clock Takes me back to the memory lane And the way the tears fall Each drop makes my heart cry out in pain I put all my trust in you And you stab me in the back You just said 'you love me' But you never prove Still like a fool I believe That you only love me Day by day,night after night I pray for you Till I realish That you won't be coming back You left me for good I was nothing for you It's too late,but I understood So now all that I have got Besides me.is your memories And my broken dreams.

prettyktm 29-Jul-05/11:01 PM
HA HA HA,I don't know what made you send this comment to me.but if you are a writer [like me] than let me tell you this.that some
times writing is much save and easy task to do then [f....]coz
you just need to use your brains.take care




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