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Ode to bun (Day 10) (Ode) by jdc A temporary treasure
to savour, to hold
Once pretty in pink
now covered in mould.
Blind to reason
and the seemingly grotesque
Mike persistently keeps
the bun on his desk!
Up the ladder:
little big rock
Down the ladder:
IV (Deuteronomy's Lament)
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Posted: July 14, 2004 4:45 PM PDT; Last modified: July 14, 2004 4:45 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.8340096 Overall Rank: 10768 117 view(s)
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