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GOD'S MOST WONDERFUL CREATION (Other) by iowajerms GOD'S MOST WONDERFUL CREATION
No matter if it's tall or short,
No matter if it's heavy or light,
No matter if it's fat or skinny,
No matter if it's dull or bright,
I think God's most wonderful creation
Would have to be the waterfall,
Because it always seem to become,
Something that could be beautiful.
Up the ladder:
It destroyed my life
Down the ladder:
Goldmunds Slut Fiasco v.2 [Revised]
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 1.5
Posted: August 6, 2008 1:32 AM PDT; Last modified: August 6, 2008 1:34 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.8340096 Overall Rank: 10744 Comments:
get real!
You really must not spare the rod. Thou shall fortify thy spine if thou wisheth to bestow examens of anothers' meager pennings.
No. This is not your local Church choir, this is not Hallmarks Superlative Christians' Division.
This is the Ranker:- A mighty kingdom where the most ruthless of warrior poets reside and conduct the ritual of courtly battle. Your "poem" is a disgrace to our proud temple of literature. So I say: "BEGONE FROM THIS MIGHTY KINGDOM, AND DO NOT DARE PRESENT YOUR LOWLY SPECTRE BEFORE OUR MIGHTY EYES EVER AGAIN!" 168 view(s)
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change dull to dim and we'll talk.