Re: Into My World by sliver	some deleted user 207.200.116.65	13-Oct-05/5:25 PM
Here is another 10.
Re: Prayer For The Church by sliver	some deleted user 207.200.116.65	13-Oct-05/5:25 PM
Yippeee sliver--excellent poem. I thought it was fabulous...so i gave you a TEN.......i am putting ten in caps just to make sure you don't mistaken it for a 0!
Re: In the aspens by sliver	some deleted user 207.200.116.65	13-Oct-05/5:23 PM
Here's the ten you wanted
Re: Old Friends by sliver	some deleted user 207.200.116.65	13-Oct-05/5:07 PM
OK...so why did you say I gave you a zero when imnotgoodatpoetry did???? Whats up with that Sliver? I GAVE you a ten....
Re: a love not meant to be by nentwined	cabot 68.8.167.40	13-Oct-05/4:39 PM
great poem
Re: There’s A Voice Deep Inside My Head by celticskatermatt1	cabot 68.8.167.40	13-Oct-05/4:36 PM
awsome poem dude. you rock, see you in marine science
Re: Being The Best by cabot	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	13-Oct-05/4:30 PM
Study meter in poetry and then edit.
Re: Ode to the Sun by TLRufener	cabot 68.8.167.40	13-Oct-05/4:29 PM
your poem is so awsome
Re: a comment on Tonight’s Halloween by TLRufener	TLRufener 140.146.216.76	13-Oct-05/4:29 PM
Thank you.
Re: The Servant and The Messenger by ALChemy	cabot 68.8.167.40	13-Oct-05/4:27 PM
hey good poem its awsome
Re: A Harsh Break-up by BrAnDiLoVesYoU	cabot 68.8.167.40	13-Oct-05/4:21 PM
its a really good poem
Re: a comment on Sleep by ALChemy	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	13-Oct-05/4:08 PM
Thank'ya young'un. If an 8 is "awsome" then a 10 for you must be downright orgasmic. Sadly I've never read a poem that's done the latter for me yet. By the way I looked up your spelling of "awsome" and it's actually excepted as a word. Ironically "thank'ya" is not.
Re: Sleep by ALChemy	cabot 68.8.167.40	13-Oct-05/3:47 PM
Good Poem, it is awsome
Re: a comment on Adelaide by wilco	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	13-Oct-05/3:46 PM
It still comes off as love between you and something (city or woman or whatever) and the bullet wounds and other more subtle things imply war even if it's some kind of metaphor. You humanized a city but left pretty much no clue to us geographically challenged that it was a city you were talking to. Unless different interpretations is what your going for it's not necessarily a good thing. I still like its melodic qualities.
Re: Are you my love? by Prince of Void	cabot 68.8.167.40	13-Oct-05/3:46 PM
its a good poem. i like it because i can relate to it. nice job
Re: a comment on Take heart, you are closer than you know by Bobjim	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	13-Oct-05/3:18 PM
Go to http://www.eliteskills.com/writing_scams/poetry.com.scam.php for more info. It also gives a list of other famous writer scams. Don't feel bad. I submitted. Hell, it was free and they give you that letter to show off to gullible women who like poets. So far no proof that these women exist though. My suggestion: Hurry up and delete your poem here and resubmit it sans comments.
Re: Brethren, oblivion is not the road to the city Ataraxis. by SupremeDreamer	wilco 66.61.101.130	13-Oct-05/1:13 PM
Hey, haven't seen you in a while dreamersupremer. On the subject of this poem..it's just too damn long and there's just not enough interesting here to necessitate it being that long (I started wishing for Cliff's Notes). It's good and I almst gave a 9 but it needs to be shortended.
Re: Take heart, you are closer than you know by Bobjim	wilco 66.61.101.130	13-Oct-05/1:07 PM
I love the title. I don't like the poem, but I love the title.
Re: a comment on Take heart, you are closer than you know by Bobjim	wilco 66.61.101.130	13-Oct-05/1:06 PM
OK, I feel the need to tell you that Poetry.com is a scam. Well, not really...you'll get your book but know this...it's not going to be sold at your local Barnes & Noble. They publish everybody that wants to be published. They give awards to everybody that pays them. So, save your money, pal. If you've already paid..well keep the book on the coffee tabls, tell women you're a published poet and get some ass out of it.
Re: untitled rhyme royal 3 by starkfister	wilco 66.61.101.130	13-Oct-05/12:58 PM
I want to give this a three but for some reason I like it....