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Being The Best (Free verse) by cabot When you try to be the best
you will end up a mess
you pratice as hard as you can
till the sweat drips from your face to the palm of your hand
you try to fight the pain
and the ones you look up to are in shame
know matter how hard you try
in the end you will die
you need to realize
that you can never be the best
because theres always someone better
Up the ladder:
Ode to bun (Day 10)
Down the ladder:
The Walker
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Posted: October 13, 2005 2:05 PM PDT; Last modified: October 13, 2005 2:05 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.8340096 Overall Rank: 10768 Comments:
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ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159
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13-Oct-05/4:30 PM
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Study meter in poetry and then edit.
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