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Being The Best (Free verse) by cabot

When you try to be the best you will end up a mess you pratice as hard as you can till the sweat drips from your face to the palm of your hand you try to fight the pain and the ones you look up to are in shame know matter how hard you try in the end you will die you need to realize that you can never be the best because theres always someone better

ALChemy 13-Oct-05/4:30 PM
Study meter in poetry and then edit.




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