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If I Only Had You (Free verse) by cabot
Days and weeks pass by so fast it feels like every minute i'm running the hundred yard dash i'm out of breath, and the day is done my only hope is for tomarrow to come and just like eveyday i will try to find away to say to tell you the way i feel about you because without you i wont survive and ever chance i get i strive to finsh the race thinking you will be my prize in the end but in the end i'm left with nothing nothing at all, except my feelings for you and in a heart beat i would say i do because marrying you would be like a dream come true your everything to me and without you this would just be a poem of eternity a poem with just words that say i need you in my life everyday

Up the ladder: Negative
Down the ladder: Ode to bun (Day 10)

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Arithmetic Mean: 1.5
Weighted score: 4.8340096
Overall Rank: 10766
Posted: October 12, 2005 10:38 PM PDT; Last modified: October 12, 2005 10:38 PM PDT
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