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If I Only Had You (Free verse) by cabot
Days and weeks pass by so fast
it feels like every minute i'm running the hundred yard dash
i'm out of breath, and the day is done
my only hope is for tomarrow to come and just like eveyday
i will try to find away to say
to tell you the way i feel about you
because without you i wont survive
and ever chance i get i strive to finsh the race
thinking you will be my prize in the end
but in the end i'm left with nothing
nothing at all, except my feelings for you
and in a heart beat i would say i do
because marrying you would be like a dream come true
your everything to me and without you this would just be
a poem of eternity
a poem with just words that say
i need you in my life everyday
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Arithmetic Mean: 1.5
Weighted score: 4.8340096
Overall Rank: 10766
Posted: October 12, 2005 10:38 PM PDT; Last modified: October 12, 2005 10:38 PM PDT
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