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Envy (Free verse) by celticskatermatt1
Green with envy in my eyes help save me from all her lies i wish i could kiss her face without the blasted disgrace of the hurt thats inside washing my soul, like the tide burning my feet with a longing sorrow her love is something not to borrow its what i need to stay alive maybe a date at a quater to five?

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Arithmetic Mean: 1.5
Weighted score: 4.8340096
Overall Rank: 10752
Posted: October 10, 2005 7:41 PM PDT; Last modified: October 10, 2005 7:41 PM PDT
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