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A Harsh Break-up (Free verse) by BrAnDiLoVesYoU
Split in half, love now over for two
The thoughts run throughout giving her no clue
He is special and gifted like no other
His thoughts, her thoughts combined, without one thinking
By his decision, she agreed. But a talk ended a friendship
Now ignorance and hatred are broughten over each other
Nor speak nor look. Its over by a brutal choice.
That night no one will know what ran through their minds
But that the silent war has ended and cheers of freedom erupted.
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.928861
Overall Rank: 9187
Posted: October 13, 2005 4:17 PM PDT; Last modified: October 13, 2005 4:17 PM PDT
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