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Free verse № 132044

A Harsh Break-up

Member since 2005 · Posted 13 Oct 2005 · 1 comment

Split in half, love now over for two The thoughts run throughout giving her no clue He is special and gifted like no other His thoughts, her thoughts combined, without one thinking By his decision, she agreed. But a talk ended a friendship Now ignorance and hatred are broughten over each other Nor speak nor look. Its over by a brutal choice. That night no one will know what ran through their minds But that the silent war has ended and cheers of freedom erupted.

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[7] cabot 13-Oct-05/4:21 PM Reply
its a really good poem