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A Harsh Break-up (Free verse) by BrAnDiLoVesYoU
Split in half, love now over for two The thoughts run throughout giving her no clue He is special and gifted like no other His thoughts, her thoughts combined, without one thinking By his decision, she agreed. But a talk ended a friendship Now ignorance and hatred are broughten over each other Nor speak nor look. Its over by a brutal choice. That night no one will know what ran through their minds But that the silent war has ended and cheers of freedom erupted.

Up the ladder: 3312
Down the ladder: In To Deep, Ideally

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.928861
Overall Rank: 9187
Posted: October 13, 2005 4:17 PM PDT; Last modified: October 13, 2005 4:17 PM PDT
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[7] cabot @ 68.8.167.40 | 13-Oct-05/4:21 PM | Reply
its a really good poem
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