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A Harsh Break-up (Free verse) by BrAnDiLoVesYoU

Split in half, love now over for two The thoughts run throughout giving her no clue He is special and gifted like no other His thoughts, her thoughts combined, without one thinking By his decision, she agreed. But a talk ended a friendship Now ignorance and hatred are broughten over each other Nor speak nor look. Its over by a brutal choice. That night no one will know what ran through their minds But that the silent war has ended and cheers of freedom erupted.

cabot 13-Oct-05/4:21 PM
its a really good poem




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