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untitled rhyme royal 3 (Other) by starkfister
Mercury has the sweetest kiss The taste of silver in your mouth There will be some blood in your piss And other problems down south You might just start talking to cowths Your words won’t make any sense Against mercury there is no defense

Up the ladder: the wind outside
Down the ladder: A Father's Day Late

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.928861
Overall Rank: 9246
Posted: October 12, 2005 5:37 PM PDT; Last modified: October 12, 2005 5:37 PM PDT
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[7] wilco @ 66.61.101.130 | 13-Oct-05/12:58 PM | Reply
I want to give this a three but for some reason I like it....
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